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Happy editing! Cheers, Pincrete (talk) 13:16, 23 November 2022 (UTC)

Hello, I'm afraid I reverted your edits I hope the reasons are clear. Basically the lead (intro) is always a summary of the main facts in the article, and shouldn't deviate more than is necessary from the article subject (the subject is the Windrush scandal rather than the Windrush generation or the initial Windrush Empire journey's passengers - both of which have their own articles). Also, while your comments about the psychological damage (distress, pain and frustration) of being systematically 'messed around' and 'fobbed off' by successive Home Secretaries and governments are almost certainly true, the info isn't sourced to anyone and strays away from the core facts of the case and is what we call editorialising - ie commenting on the facts. Anyone needing to be told that being treated in that way is distressing, probably needs an empathy transplant anyway!

Take Care, Pincrete (talk) 13:31, 23 November 2022 (UTC)