User talk:Astrid Groeneveld

Dunnage Bags article
Hi Astrid,

I like your Dunnage Bags article and I'll been tinkering on it, trying to help improve it in minor ways. One thing that you might want to consider is a small re-write of the lead paragraph. Sentences that talk about why (e.g. "This article is written to explain how the use of dunnage bags can have an impact on the road safety.) might be better off as sentences that are specific to what dunnage bags are and why they are important (e.g. "Dunnage bags consist of closed chambers made from an elastic film and filled with air. They are used to secure cargo during transport".) For some idea's about the lead paragraph, checkout Lead section. Just a friendly suggestion. Let me know if there is anything I can do to help out. ;) Buddy23Lee (talk) 19:32, 16 November 2009 (UTC)


 * Astrid, the Dunnage Bags page is looking really good. I'm sorry to say that I don't know why the page would be constantly scrolling up for you. I hasn't and doesn't do that on either of the three computers I've worked on lately. Have you tried loading the page on a different computer? It might be a problem with the computer you are using. Sorry I can't do more to help. Buddy23Lee (talk) 05:10, 27 November 2009 (UTC)

Your recent edits
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Load securing
I'd appreciate your input to my comments at talk:load securing. Thanks! Wizard191 (talk) 02:34, 5 December 2009 (UTC)

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