User talk:At815913/sandbox

AlexAnderson97 (talk) 19:17, 20 April 2018 (UTC)So after reading what you have so far, I think that you are off to a good start. Your paragraph has neutral standpoint and follows the rules of citation that Wikipedia has. The one thing that I do have to critique is that there could be a little bit more information on your sandbox about queering. Maybe try to add information about how it is looked at and used in today's world or even critiques of using the word in general.

I would get rid of the quotations around Queering in your first sentence, as I'm not too sure they are necessary in an article on queering. Also, this sentence sounds a little weird "and is used as a way to challenge heteronormativity by looking for places in a text by challenging heterosexuality or identity binaries". I would possibly change it to "is used as a way to challenge heteronormativity in texts by analyzing its use of heterosexuality or identity binaries" or something similar. It just reads a little awkwardly the way you have it now. Also I would move the citations you have after 1980s and 1990s to the end of the sentence. I think this is a great starting paragraph. I would like to see more information on current uses of queering, or an example of a queered text, perhaps. --JereSierr (talk) 22:27, 20 April 2018 (UTC)