User talk:Atorres19/sandbox

Peer Review by Kimberley Catherine Goveas
I enjoyed reading the article. I really liked how it immediately dives into the factors that affect female athletes' income and ends with the statistics of the income disparities between female and male athletes. However, I feel like you can still develop the points you added. For example, in the section about 'Biological Difference' on the last point you added (the tennis match "Battle of the Sexes" which King had won), how did King win? Since you had previously mentioned that "Female athletes do not have the same level of athletic performance as male athletes." and so on, was it because she was competing against a retired man of fifty-five years of age and he did not have the strength he used to have back then or maybe the match was rigged (there were rumors that the entire match had been rigged by the mob and this was reported by ESPN)? I like how you added the 'Title IX' section, but it would be nice if you considered expanding it. Also, you forgot to add the links to the other pages/websites. Overall, I'm looking forward to how you incorporate these ideas into your presentation!

-- Kgoveas (talk) | Kimberley Goveas