User talk:Atowfiq1

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alexander V. Balatsky has been accepted
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Your submission at Articles for creation: John J. Rehr has been accepted
 John J. Rehr, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 23:42, 26 September 2014 (UTC)
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I apologize for the  prior reviews. It is well accepted that Fellow APS meets the WP:PROF standard, and certainly does along with an impressive citation record. However, it was necessary to make some changes; fortunately, I work extensively with articles such as this, and I made them for you, which is easier than trying to explain how to do them. . The Education section was copied from his web site; this is not permitted. It is admittedly somewhat difficult to express the basis facts of a CV in a radically different way, because it must follow chronological order, but at least the wording can be altered. The use of references and links was not in accordance with our practices: if you will check the changes I made, you will see how to do it in the future. There was also a little duplication, which I dealt with, and there is one remaining problem for which I placed a "citation needed" tag. And the custom for listing students in the infobox is for notable students, those with WP articles, not every one of them. (I made some similar adjustments to the article on Balatsky). Please keep these in mind for future work.  DGG ( talk ) 23:56, 26 September 2014 (UTC)