User talk:Atrainsixteen

July 2022
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September 2022
Hello. Your recent edit to Great Oak High School appears to have added the name of a non-notable entity to a list that normally includes only notable entries. In general, a person, organization or product added to a list should have a pre-existing article before being added to most lists. If you wish to create such an article, please first confirm that the subject qualifies for a separate, stand-alone article according to Wikipedia's notability guideline. Thank you. Tacyarg (talk) 20:14, 2 September 2022 (UTC)

Please do not add or change content, as you did at Great Oak High School, without citing a reliable source. Please review the guidelines at Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. And please don't mention non-notable lower level staff, or students, by name Meters (talk) 02:45, 3 September 2022 (UTC)


 * I added simple things including the school had a band marching, which is found already on a source. I can source the things again but the sources already on the site cover the additional info I provided Atrainsixteen (talk) 03:06, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Also the staff mentioned had been the head of AP and IB at the school, and not a lower level staff. Which is of similar position to the principal at the school but deals more with Academic programs Atrainsixteen (talk) 03:10, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
 * All information I added too can be shown under source 5 and source 11, I can reuse the citation if that's what you need. The original edit had left out valuable information about the school, and the large activities at the school. Atrainsixteen (talk) 03:13, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
 * None of what you added was sourced. No, the head of IB/AP is not on par with the principal. The principal is the only non-notable staff we mention in high school articles. Meters (talk) 04:14, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
 * I suggest you read WP:PUFFERY too. Meters (talk) 04:18, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
 * lol alright, I mean you can search like any high school and they do say award winning. But if I get the source for the stuff, I fine? Atrainsixteen (talk) 04:48, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
 * what if it sourced in a different section? Cause I dont want to repeat the same source but like a lot of the info on the other sources has info not included Atrainsixteen (talk) 04:50, 3 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Source your claims, write them neutrally, write them clearly and grammatically, and don't add information that should not be in a high school article. "Since the schools founding Great Oak High School leads Riverside County, California school districts with overall high test scores" is unsourced puffery, and contains a punctuation error. "In the same year, coach Jared Boyatt for the boys golf won coach of the year, after winning CIF-Sourthern Section Eastern Team divisional with a record score of 349" is unsourced, poorly written, and contains spelling and grammar errors. And he did not win divisionals, the team did. And who awarded this supposed coach of the year award? The school? The league? The division? The section? The state association? "With the formation of the band in 2005,who are internationally recognized with Marching in Paris, London, Rome, and Washington D.C" is unsourced puffery that is so badly written it is little more than gibberish. Meters (talk) 05:25, 3 September 2022 (UTC)