User talk:Atringale19/Information Privilege/Sashness Peer Review

Hey Anthony, your contribution to the article was very well put together, but here is some feedback. The writing was organized and every sentence was relevant to the next. However, the numbers for the citations are out of order. I didn't think there was any information that seemed unnecessary or off-topic, the writing contribution was organized and informative. The information was also neutral and did not have any marginalized or biased perspectives. There are reliable sources provided as well.There were no negative associations or words that don't feel neutral. Although the information provided may be considered negative, but with the aspect of the topic, I would expect it to be. Duke and the organizations you cited from are great sources, and they all match up with the information you provided. Overall, your contribution was informative and well put together, I would maybe provide a little more information on those that have the privilege of information, since you provided a good perspective of those that miss out on information.

Sashness (talk) 21:06, 24 October 2021 (UTC)