User talk:Atrinh6/sandbox

Om's Peer Review
Your Drosophila innubila article contribution is very straightforward and clear, you did a good job keeping the information neutral! I think if you say at the end of a paragraph, "_______ is still unknown or unclear", you could possibly follow it up with studies that are related to that, maybe in a different species? I think it would help create a more complete article instead of ending on an uncertainty. -Ochitnis (talk) 20:37, 12 May 2019 (UTC)