User talk:AubreeRaya/Islamic feminism

THIS IS YOUR PEER REVIEW:

Hey Aubree!

I just read your article and it is helpful with understanding the changes in Islam. I like the links that you provided for the various people you introduce, its much simpler than providing lengthy explanations of who the authors are which can easily confuse readers. The articles you used seem to be credible academic sources; however, I would be careful with NY Times articles as some tend to be biased. The only issues I see is that there are some links that say citations are needed. Also, the paragraph that mentions Mahood A, Moel J, Hudson C, and Leathers L. is awkwardly worded in the first sentence. Overall, I think the article is on the right track and flows with the rest of the Wiki page.

Jeniveegastelum (talk) 03:34, 28 October 2019 (UTC)