User talk:Audley Lloyd

The last sentence and a half of the lead sound like they come out of an advertisement, but otherwise, this article looks pretty good. I think the best way for you to get more attention to it might be to submit it to Did you know (DYK) so it will appear on the main page. If you'd like any further information on DYK, you can feel free to ask me, or ask one of the many helpful users at that project. Someguy1221 (talk) 19:25, 23 April 2009 (UTC)