User talk:Audrat09/A’s LGBTQ+ workers, LGBTQ+ nonprofit organizing, and LGBTQ+ sex work/Bibliography

H's Peer Review
Hey A! I really liked the seven sources you selected because they were all very informative and each added substance to your assigned topics. However I was not able to access the fifth source/reference! I am able to view the DOI number for each reference but the fifth one! The fifth one says it was accessed via “communication source”...I am not sure if this means I would only be able to access this through Texas State because it is through the library database. Besides that the other sources look great and are easy to find! A’s final topics include LGBTQ+ nonprofit organizing LGBTQ+ sex work, and LGBTQ+ workers and communication.These topics will fit into A’s “general/bigger” section of LGBTQ+ organizational communication because each article can add to the different views, perspectives, and communication challenges that LGBTQ+ individuals might experience. I personally believe A’s plan is clearly identified and organized in a way to help their overall section succeed. As a general reader, maintaining these explanations as to “how” these articles will help your writing will also help a general reader, so great job! A has provided enough sources to sufficiently introduce this topic to Wikipedia.

(Missy-Squishy 24 (talk) 23:57, 15 April 2024 (UTC)


 * H,
 * Thank you for pointing out the inaccessibility of the fifth source! I'll try and make it accessible in the references page and the cited paragraph. I appreciate how complimentary you are of my work and that you note how successful I was in putting my work on this wiki page. Thanks, H! Audrat09 (talk) 18:07, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Dr. E's Review
A, great detailed descriptions and good COMM sources overall! The references need cleaning up, and I am not sure if 2 is a COMM source of not as it is written. Please see Canvas for more feedback and respond to this feedback on Wiki during our workshop time. OsaRosa (talk) 08:24, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Dr. E,
 * Thank you for your feedback! I will change my style of writing to adapt to the Wiki style more, and use the Women's Studies page as something to bounce off of. I'll make clearer connections as well. Overall I appreciate your criticism and will utilize it! Audrat09 (talk) 18:04, 16 April 2024 (UTC)