User talk:Audrey Strachan/sandbox

Hi Audrey,

From reading your article so far, in terms of making the article more clear and concise with outline maybe you can create subcategories especially for quotes relating to Pae White? The subject of "Early life and childhood" I feel like may be a little bit underrepresented. maybe add more information about how she grew up and if it was incorporated in her works?

Under "Works" Maybe you can go into more in-depth with each of her art pieces and talk more about the inspiration behind it? I think it could give some insight about Pae White? I feel like more subcategories relating to her work would make reading the article a lot easier.

Overall, I think you did really well with keeping the article neutral! I look forward to learning more about Pae White!

Kate Kim