User talk:Audryelise18/article draft

Nirmeen Mandour - Peer Review
Hi Audry,

I really enjoyed reading your Wiki page! I think that it is clear and concise and the way that you have laid it out makes it so that the reader isn't overwhelmed by an abundance of information. I would maybe add the setting before the plot summary as a preface to the plot summary itself. Other than that, I think your page is super solid so far!

Sourcing/Citing
Audrey. . page is moving along beautifully! Congrats. But don't forget to cite and source. ProfHanley (talk) 18:13, 12 November 2019 (UTC)