User talk:Aurgallagher/sandbox

I really enjoyed the changes you made to the first paragraph, it was hard to understand and didn't flow well, but the way you rewrote it made much more sense to a reader who does not know anything about this subject. i think everything that you'redoing seems right on track with how you can really make this page better. 38.140.224.154 (talk) 19:25, 13 March 2019 (UTC)