User talk:Austin.larsen/sandbox

Rating = 2. Need to proofread carefully for proper spelling and grammar. Example in first sentence - born, not borne. Don't use colloquialisms like "bring himself up to speed. " This sentence has mistakes in punctuation, spelling, and lacks a reference citation: "It is speculated in a paper by Elizabeth J. barns named The Early Carer of George John Romanes,"  "When Charles Darwin passed," - passed what? (Don't use passed - just say died.) The entire Accomplishments section is written sloppily and needs to be corrected in several places.

Fixing these problems should actually be pretty quick and easy. J.R. Council (talk) 20:23, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

There are still problems - not yet ready for prime-time
The following list is just SOME of the problems that you should have caught by proofreading carefully. It is not my job to proofread for you. The last two problems I even noted before, but they still weren't fixed. These are easy fixes - please take the time to do it right.

He was subject to a well-traveled and intellectual frame-work early in his life. - poor wording and grammar

Expanded description - does not make sense as a section title

The questions were non utility of many specify characters, - - poor wording and grammar

Elizabeth J. barns - capitalize last name

The Early Carer of George John Romanes - misspelled

J.R. Council (talk) 19:41, 2 May 2014 (UTC)

Please proofread carefully!
I found:

non utility of many specify characters

Gorge Romanes

His father ,Reverend

The Early Carer

and what's wrong with this sentence? These are just a handful of the many inspiring and intellectual books and articles written by George Romanes over his lifetime and even after his death.

J.R. Council (talk) 22:50, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Nice job! Approved
You have my okay to publish! J.R. Council (talk) 19:50, 7 May 2014 (UTC)