User talk:Austun Sheffer/Censorship in Japan

Hey Austun. I think this is a great article to work on. If you added examples of literature that dealt with censorship, that would help your point. I like adding kabuki, and I think you should discuss how eventually censorship worked on kabuki. The current form is all male, having men play both male and female parts. Great work.GoforPapaPalpatine (talk) 20:37, 8 November 2019 (UTC)

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Hi, Austun! I would recommend having a summary rather than an actual quote (for the edict) so it seems more like the tone of Wikipedia. Also, I feel like you are translating a lot of Japanese terms. I would see if it’s possible to link them to other Wikipedia pages, if possible. Lastly, I noticed that your sources are on the web, but I’m not able to click on any of the links.

Overall, though, great job at expanding on a topic I’d like to know more about! Good luck on the rest of your project! Zealora (talk) 04:09, 9 November 2019 (UTC)