User talk:Authenticfolk/sandbox

Hello Authenticfolk. You may want to eradicate the passive voice from your edits. For example instead of, "Buck was assigned Irving P. Whitehead as her attorney who was a known eugenicist" write Irving P. Whitehead, a known eugenicist, served as Buck's attorney. Also, how was Whitehead's connection to the eugenics movement known? Is this through his "acquaintance" with Aubrey E. Strode? Is there a stronger word than "acquaintance" to describe their relationship? Dr. Biro Walters (talk) 18:41, 20 November 2020 (UTC)