User talk:Autolycus

Hi. I need the article title to track it down, thanks, jimfbleak 17:33, 12 May 2007 (UTC)


 * sorry about the delay, had to eat. When first created, the article was unsourced, and I have no way of knowing if references would be added. It also read like promtional material, and I think still does.


 * If you are going to describe it as a "powerful lobbying group", you need an independent reference to justify that. A list of member benefits also looks promotional. You haven't actually established notability. I know the FSB is notable, but an overseas editor might have concerns that the only link is to the FSB website. In its present more complete form the article is clearly unlikely to be subject to speedy deletion, but you should at least add some independent sources. jimfbleak 19:32, 12 May 2007 (UTC)