User talk:Autumn B03

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Hello, Autumn B03, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Re: William Dorsey Swann
Hi there, I wanted to just drop a quick message about why I made a reversion of your edit. Adding more sources and details about Swann's life is an amazing contribution and we really appreciate constructive contributions. However, several sections read more as a persuasive essay rather than the more encyclopedic tone that Wikipedia uses in its articles. Additionally, the geographical context section (which I can appreciate since I have an MA in geography myself) appears to be original research or synthesis which is not allowed in Wikipedia articles (see WP:NOR). I will be around for a while longer today if you'd like to discuss a bit further about improving the draft in your sandbox or you can always message someone at the Wikipedia Teahouse. RA 0808 talkcontribs 19:57, 20 December 2021 (UTC)