User talk:AvatarAang94/sandbox

Maybe Suggestions?
So I'm not 100% sure if you're open to comments yet but I do have a potential suggestion? I think it might be helpful to talk a little bit more about the coordination complex of zinc and the geometries.

Also, it might be helpful to put Structure before Mechanism. It feels like you're talking about the structure of the active site for the first time in the Mechanism part and then in the Structure part, you talk less about the structure of active site than in the Mechanism part. For example, in Structure, it mentions nothing about the fourth histidine in proximity to the water in the active site, etc.

Sohn.philip (talk) 19:14, 26 February 2015 (UTC)