User talk:Avdarsan

Alliin
Can you please resubmit the reaction scheme without any words in the graphic? Thanks--Smokefoot (talk) 18:53, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
 * More significantly, File:Alliin first mehtod.jpg has many structures with propyl rather than allyl. But at least as significantly, "welcome and thanks for contributing to out chemistry articles!" DMacks (talk) 19:37, 21 December 2015 (UTC)
 * ...and File:Alliin second methodology.jpg has an occasional propyl-vs-allyl, and also multiple mistakes in the nature of the Boc group (variations among aminal, hydroxyaminal, and carbamate oxidation-states). Given how irrelevant the structures of the Boc and Fmoc groups are, you might want to just abbreviate them as such in the diagrams...helps readers focus on the actual transformations occurring as it relates to the target synthesis rather than a discourse in protecting-group strategies. DMacks (talk) 19:46, 21 December 2015 (UTC)

Reference formatting
Also, please take a look at the results of the references you added. For example, you put two authors' last-names in a single "last=" field and their first names in the "first=" field. So it gets formatted as [last, first], placing both lasts then both firsts. Then you put volume/pagenumber in the "journal=" field, which makes them italicized as part of the journal title. The citation templates aren't as smart as we'd like:) Instead, you have to put each separate author separately ("first1=" "last1" "first2" "last2", etc.) and separate fields for "volume=" and "pages=". cite journal has pretty extensive documentation and examples if you want more complete or technical information about it. DMacks (talk) 19:34, 21 December 2015 (UTC)