User talk:AveryGroner/sandbox

Good work on your article Avery. I thought that you were to the point and concise in putting forth the information about the convention of colored men in Florida. In all honesty, I don't see how you could improve the lead of your article as you posed the information easily and understandably. I do think you could make it more clear on who founded the Florida State Convention of Colored Men, I believe you talked about a judge but I was unsure. I really liked your tab on notable members of the convention, after seeing that I will definitely look into my league's members. Your tone was neutral during all times of the article and that was easily visible. Other than making the founders of the convention a tab or taking a little more time on their information, I don't see any other issues.

Noblett97 (talk) 00:28, 13 March 2020 (UTC)     Jake Noblett