User talk:Avidworks

== Your submission at Articles for creation: Ken Barnes - Eight time World skeet shooting champion (November 17) ==  Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Vanderwaalforces was:

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Vanderwaalforces (talk) 17:47, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

November 2023
Hello. Your recent edit to North High School (Bakersfield, California) appears to have added the name of a non-notable entity to a list that normally includes only notable entries. In general, a person, organization or product added to a list should have a pre-existing article before being added to most lists. If you wish to create such an article, please first confirm that the subject qualifies for a separate, stand-alone article according to Wikipedia's notability guideline. Thank you. Meters (talk) 23:27, 17 November 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello. I have 3 separate references for that person. I'm working on getting their personal page created and am having difficulty. Any guidance? I submitted a detailed draft but was declined. Avidworks (talk) 02:49, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
 * Your draft currently has only one reference, and not a very good one at that (his school's hall of fame). Your content is most overly-close paraphrasing of that high school source, it uses non neutral language, and it violates the WP:MOS by being formatted as a bulleted list. Meters (talk) 05:30, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

Concern regarding Draft:Ken Barnes - Eight time World skeet shooting champion
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 06:05, 19 April 2024 (UTC)