User talk:Avielman/NG 6/Dbece005 Peer Review

Hi Avielman,

Great post your missing one more citation remember you need 3 scholarly articles. I would also add more to your second paragraph. I would suggest maybe explaining more what your terms are such as mandibular fossa,supraorbital angle and occipital tori. But I would suggest maybe defining some of the term to help readers understand better. Great post overall Dbece005 (talk) 06:27, 16 May 2020 (UTC)dbece005