User talk:Avillalobostovar/sandbox

Peer Review: Katia Flores

I think you did a great job covering the effects machismo has on mental health, but I would rephrase that quotation and instead say "Experts have agreed that..." or something along those lines, as I don't believe quotations are allowed in Wikipedia. I might be wrong though! I'd also make sure to list my citations, especially with this statement: "Typically in Mexican culture (and in other Latin American countries), there is a reliance on religious and herbal medicinal practices to overcome a lot of illnesses, whether they be physical or mental illnesses. With this, many individuals are often told that they should rely on God and their religious faith." Without sources, this sounds a lot like speculation.

I also think you could benefit from adding how this affects women, as I see you mainly focused on the effect this cultural beliefs have on men. Overall though, I think you touched on a super important topic regarding the toxicity of machismo, and why it's not just "a cultural thing" we can brush off.

Peer Review: Jalen Lomax

This was a really well done article that has citations at the right time and provides a lot of new information. I think it would be beneficial for your article to possible include statistics that show the disparities between latino men and other demographics of men when it comes to suicide rates or percentage of males that go to therapy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jlomax1 (talk • contribs) 23:30, 29 November 2020 (UTC)