User talk:Awalzy9

Hi, I notice your edits to neural plasticity and basically like them. There is one aspect that will need to be fixed: lots of things are worded non-neutrally, i.e. using words like "key", "remarkable", etc., where they don't really convey facts but only attitudes. I'll be happy to do a copy-edit once you are done working with the article, but I thought I might as well mention this to you in case you would rather fix it yourself. Regards, Looie496 (talk) 17:52, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

I love your content additions to the page - they are first-rate and were sorely needed but your language is really awkward and in many cases grammatically incorrect. Please keep adding to the page; just don't be upset if someone like me changes the wording (but retains the meaning). Neuro777