User talk:Awil362/MontpellierEconomy

Evaluation for the last post.

Spelling/grammar Good Language Good Organization Good Validity Good Completion Good Relevance Good Sources Good Citations Good References Good

Everything looks good to me.

Spelling & Grammar:
-Nearly perfect. Here are some minor things, though:
 * 1) "70,000 students in it's (its) two universities"
 * 2) "with much of it's (its) population attending university and 50% of it's (its) population being less that 34 years old"
 * 3) "10,000 of which (whom) are foreign"
 * 4) The numbers 1,000 and 4,800 in paragraphs one and two (respectively) need commas.
 * 5) "...continue to be a problem it may be a problem for the city's economy." (maybe say "it may affect the city's economy")

Language:
-Good tone and clear wording. -There is a lot of repetition of words. "City", in particular is overused. You can use "it", "there", "here", or others to replace this in some parts. Maybe read aloud to yourself; you'll hear the problem.

Organization:
-Good organization/flow. -You could add sections/headings (like "industry", "agriculture", "education", etc.) if you wanted, but it isn't necessary. -You might want to label the reference section.

Coding:
-No problems.

Completeness:
-Very complete.

Relevance:
-Everything is relevant!

Citations:
-Great. All of them open to legitimate sources.

Hello! This is very well-written; it's concise, clear, and easy-to-read. Amazing job! Avictory (talk) 20:25, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

"Article evaluation"
===3/20/18 Evaluation

Spelling/Grammar
Good. Just read the piece and fine tune it.

Language
Good. Nice tune.

Organization
Good

Coding
Good

Validity
Good

Completion
Good

Relevance
Good

Spelling/Grammar
Exceeds Standard. Excellent spelling. You article provides very clear and concise factual statements. Nice job.

Language
Exceeds Standard. Your article has a clear cut encyclopedic tone which provides readers with important facts.

Organization
Exceeds Standard. Well organized article. Perhaps you can add more background information on the city.

Coding
Exceeds Standard. Acceptable coding.

Validity
Exceeds Standard. Provides accurate details about the subject at hand and referred to authentic/reliable sources.

Completion
Nearly Meets Standard. There are some more important aspects of the economy that you can include in this article such as annual income per person, city budget, or even GDP.

Relevance
Exceeds Standard. No irrelevant content provided.

Third Edit - Anja
Spelling/Grammar - Perfect

Language - Perfect

Organization - Perfect

Coding - Perfect

Validity - Solid

Completeness - Complete

Relevance - No irrelevant content

Sources - High quality sources

Citations - Present and in good format

References - Present and in good format

Great job!