User talk:Axel73b

Prof. Mc (talk) 21:31, 23 May 2014 (UTC)

Edits to AleSmith Brewing Company page
Hi! thanks for your recent edits to the AleSmith page. It's great to see someone putting in all that effort on the beer pages. I notice, though, that much of the material that you've introduced is in danger of being tagged as "peacock" language. So, language such as "Many of their beers are known for their depth of character and complexity" is usually frowned upon because it's subjective and unverifiable. This as well: "AleSmith's bottles are easily recognizable from their simple, down-to-earth artwork and text" is likely to be edited out by someone, because that's a sentence that could apply to the bottles from many breweries.

I write this not to discourage you from working on the page, but to let you know that the Wikipedia style guides are enforced by roving bands of volunteers who are likely to come through at some point and change or remove that language. You might think about how to structure it ahead of time so that future edits add to the subject matter rather than subtract from what's on the page. And, please feel free to stop by WP:BEER to participate in the Beer Project. And you can use my talk page to drop me a message. If you'd like to reply to this message and want me to notice the reply, indent your reply with a colon mark and start with  Prof. Mc (talk) 21:43, 23 May 2014 (UTC)