User talk:Axelwang1/draft:strength of lithosphere

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Intro
 * Maybe move the first sentance to the begining for clarity
 * Somewhat got lost while reading the into
 * Not sure if the "For example..." is needed
 * Feel like some of the information could be in the body part
 * Doesn't seem to be that many sources (not sure if it needs any though as the information is more of a summary)

Rheological laws and basic variables
 * First sentance is a little long, maybe 2?

Deformation regimes
 * Looks good
 * Able to follow until the second equation and then a little lost... might just be it is a little over my head
 * Transition and Plastic are great and easy to follow!

Strength Profiles
 * Image/additional images def help
 * Are there major differance in the way strenght profiles are made or it this the general standard?
 * Have they changed over time?

'''Geodyn. Conseuences:'''
 * Looks good

Overall: The draft looks great!!! My only comment is that sometimes a sentance become full of information and could maybe be separated into two.