User talk:Ayc8110/sandbox

Alvin's Peer Review
I think that since your article is on Visual rhetoric, a big part of your group's focus should be on finding really good visuals that complement the material.

The Advertisement section could use a bit more work, if only because it seems like its connection with visual rhetoric seems unfinished. I think explaining in a bit more detail why these strategies are effective could really flesh out this section. If possible, some history regarding advertisement's use of visual rhetoric (who was the first to implement it? how has it evolved over time?) could really make it an interesting and exciting section.

The Graffiti section could also be fleshed out even further.

Other than that, everything looks good. The formatting is perfect and it looks like you are off to a great start.

New Outline of Visual Rhetoric
[LEAD] 1. History and Origin 2. Related Studies a. Composition b. Semiotics c. Areas of focus 3. Modern Application **insert modern uses stuff here** a. Advertisements b. Science c. Visual Art d. Graffiti e. Visual rhetoric of text 4. See also 5. References 6. External links Umdtourguide (talk) 02:03, 7 March 2018 (UTC)