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Feedback on article contribution
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 * syntax ambiguity in this sentence: Wilde uses this framework to broaden the scale of sexual identity from a simple binary continuum of “mono-sexual” to “bisexual”, and to establish similarities and relationships between these identities that do not alienate those without a single “fixed object” of attraction. - What is the referent for the phrase that begins with, "that?"
 * Viewpoints like Wilde's?
 * applied by whom?
 * Would it be appropriate to articulate an underlying assumption of this theoretical project - that sexual fluidity is not a modern phenomenon, that instances are highly likely to have existed in much if not all of human history whether acknowledged or not?
 * Is D.S. Neff's work an example? If so - transition phrases such as, "for example" really do mental grunt work for readers which makes your writing more accessible, facilitates uptake of both content and meaning.
 * Don't know how to understand this phrase: and in later implications of equal merit in both male and female lovers - can you clarify?
 * Is "exploits" a word that carries sensationalising connotations? If so, does the word eroticize in a way you would not wan to do?
 * Similarly, does "dalliances" trivialize?
 * In your last sentence - what is important about queer theory's movement according to the article you reference?
 * Possibilities for expansion certainly include additional examples although since your interest is in the framework rather than the examples, perhaps you have other thoughts.--Jagrif02 (talk) 15:14, 20 October 2016 (UTC)