User talk:Azizalshalfan/sandbox

Your headings and information included are very detailed, and allow readers to glimpse a lot of information in a relatively confined space. However, to improve upon your article, I think that some of your sentences could be merged or reworded to prevent some of the choppiness. Otherwise, great work! Also, I really like your idea of adding more information regarding how CSR enables greater economic efficiency (a point that was mentioned in my article), which I believe will strengthen your case.