User talk:BBergren

Fiberglass references
Hi, thanks for your work on Fiberglass. I will be reviewing some of the additions later - they are helpful in elucidating the subject, though some things are a bit too technical at first glance and may need to be simplified or relegated to their own articles (like filament winding). My main concern is, what are the sources you are citing? If you have the full title or other information like ISBN for Strong, Rajak and Mehdikhani, I can add them to a bibliography section so readers can find and verify the information where it is cited.

Also, the use of long quotes is not ideal in some places. I'll try to rework the information into a way that is with the same encyclopedic tone as the rest of the article later, but it would be easier to do so if I had the full text.

I am looking forward to seeing more of your contributions in the future! Recon rabbit  22:39, 10 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hello, Im doing a university project where we have make contributions to a wikipedia topic of choice. my other sources are from scholarly articles and a book that I will link here (APA citations)
 * Strong, B. A. (1989). Fundamentals of Composite Manufacturing: Materials, methods and applications. Society manufacturing engineers
 * Rajak DK, Wagh PH, Linul E. Manufacturing Technologies of Carbon/Glass Fiber-Reinforced Polymer Composites and Their Properties: A Review. Polymers. 2021; 13(21):3721. https://doi.org/10.3390/polym13213721
 * Mehdikhani M, Gorbatikh L, Verpoest I, Lomov SV. Voids in fiber-reinforced polymer composites: A review on their formation, characteristics, and effects on mechanical performance. Journal of Composite Materials. 2019;53(12):1579-1669. doi:10.1177/0021998318772152
 * If you could use any of my information that would be awesome and if you need any of the other sources I used just let me know. BBergren (talk) 22:54, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * I undid the whole set of edits. I did not look in detail at the content, though at first glance some of it did seem to drift off-topic. But instead, I rejected it out-of-hand due to the extensive use of quotes. That's a licensing problem, even if there are quote-marks and citations. WP:OWNWORDS reminds to write in your own words and summarize sources rather than compiling others' words.
 * Usually, professors provide students with some educational material about the nature of Wikipedia content and some of the basic policies and starting-points for contributing. Did yours? If not, please let us know some details about the course or instructor, and the Education program can reach out to them and make sure the class is getting that useful information. DMacks (talk) 03:00, 11 April 2024 (UTC)