User talk:BBoltiansky/sandbox

Article evaluation
Brian, this is a good overview of the Talk page, but did you also consider the other questions prompted in the exercise? Be sure you're looking at Week 2 instructions. (Our syllabus lists the week numbers and the WikiEdu dashboard has the dates for your to follow along in addition to week numbers) Kquave (talk) 18:53, 11 September 2018 (UTC)

Yusuf's Peer Review
Beginning with the discussion covering the consequences of Symbolic Racism, I think it would be helpful to indicate where within the section you'd like to add your changes. Now, with regards to the additions themselves, you do a good job of introducing the major consequence of inherent prejudice toward blacks with a quote to support it. For this quote, its likely necessary to provide some background as to who "Sears" is and where her expertise lies. I feel you can go beyond this, however, by elaborating on the resulting societal limitations African Americans experience from symbolic racism. For instance, you could explore issues such as college admissions, project housing/formation of ghettos, or any other topic revealing a partiality against blacks in this country.

For you addition to the measures category, I find that it properly qualifies and further explains the methodology behind the Symbolic Racism 2000 Scale. The only suggestions I have are 1) avoid using "we" or any other pronouns so as to maintain third person point of view throughout the article and 2) possibly point out some of the main limitations of the measurement test to better inform the reader of potential shortcomings. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yusufbade (talk • contribs) 16:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)

Tena's Peer Review
I see that you were trying to add information to the article but I think you need more than to just directly copy and paste information from the source you used. I suggest including this kind of information in your own words and making sure you cite it within the information you plan to add. I also suggest finding maybe more sources to support what you are trying to say and in order to add extra information. Also I think it would help to keep in mind what overall effect this research may have in consideration of how we view race. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TenaLesly (talk • contribs) 16:49, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review- Gitika
To help you maybe find more information, I would try to look at the sources that are cited within the specific article, then using key terms search off of that. Additionally, what assisted me in this process was to use my inexperience to my advantage, by making a list of questions and using that as a guide to navigate my research. Also, think about what the social implications of peoples perception of race. I hope I am commenting on the right material! 22:57, 21 October 2018 (UTC)Gitikamaheshwari (talk)