User talk:BCBulldog2023/White-footed mouse/Curioussoul25 Peer Review

Peer Review
I liked your edits for the article a lot. One main thing I would say is that instead of rephrasing words from the sources you should also add more information that is not just citations. Also I liked the new sections you added for the article I think more of the infrastructure should be discussed in your article since you want to connect to the urban environment. Curioussoul25 (talk) 20:35, 27 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you so much for your feedback and thoughts, I really appreciate your feedback and am looking forward to implementing them. I understand that having citations solely really doesn't make way for a complete understanding so adding on to it will definitely make way for a much better understanding and a deeper connection to the overall urban environment BCBulldog2023 (talk) 00:39, 2 November 2022 (UTC)