User talk:BChung2

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Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. BChung2 (talk) 02:07, 8 January 2015 (UTC)

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Hi BChung2. I work with the Wiki Education Foundation, and help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment. If there's anything I can do to help with your assignment (or, for that matter, any other aspect of Wikipedia) please feel free to drop me a note. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:57, 8 January 2015 (UTC)

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Hi Wilzzw (talk) 03:42, 23 January 2015 (UTC)

Hi
Hi Boyee.

Long time no see. I'm sure CHM437 is going to be a blast.

Your classmate, Ryder

--Rfwh (talk) 17:41, 23 January 2015 (UTC)

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Hey Friend, I really like your User page Galanyousuf1 (talk) 17:56, 23 January 2015 (UTC)

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Hi, I’m not sure if your article is already completely finished, but I thought I just leave a few comments on what you already have: I hope you find my help useful, have a nice weekend! Vogel ant789 (talk) 22:50, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I think your introduction is very good, just one small thing: When you're talking about the Wood-Ljungdahl pathway I’d put the information that it is a convergent pathway in the 'chemistry'-paragraph, I think it's too specific information for the introduction.
 * In my opinion the paragraph about Acetyl-CoA (below the chemical equation of the Wood-Ljungdahl pathway) is not necessary for your article. You could just link 'Acetyl-CoA' to the corresponding wiki-article.
 * In the 'history'-paragraph I would avoid terms like 'In this paper' or 'In a review article', I think this is more essay-style. And I think it is also not common to mention authors’ names in a wiki-article.
 * I would chose a different arrangement of your paragraphs: I think, I’d talk about the structure first and then about the chemistry and the activity.
 * I think your paragraph about the mechanism is very specific, probably this is a little bit too much for a wiki-article, especially when you are talking in detail about the reaction mechanism of the paramagnetic mechanism.

CHM437 Peer Review
Hey BChung2,

Excellent work on your article! I feel that you are right on track with content and style.

Just some suggestions:


 * It might be better to include the reactions of the Wood-Ljungdahl Pathway as a line of text:
 * CO2 + 2H+ +2e– CO + H2O


 * You probably would have gotten to this later, however make sure you link to topics such as acetogenic, autotrophic and carbon cycle! In some cases jargan could could probably be avoided... for instance you could say "acetate forming bacteria" instead of "acetogenic".


 * Good news! It looks like appropriate structural images might already be available in the Wikimedia Commons.


 * Some sentences should be reworded so that they are more concise, and have the feel of an encyclopedia article. An example of this is the sentence, "it has been discovered that that the ACS enzyme contains three main subunits," which could simply be written as "The ACS enzyme contains...". You also don't need to capitalize topics & linked words, such as electron paramagnetic resonance, alpha helix, etc.


 * I think that the activity/mechanism section should be incorporated into the chemistry section.


 * It is likely hard to find appropriate book sources, but make sure you do an intense Google Books search to see if you can find any textbook content that is available online, or that you can access in one of UofT's libraries.

Best wishes, Czeer (talk) 01:23, 2 March 2015 (UTC)