User talk:BISCquick/sandbox

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Hi, my name is Elysia and I work for Wiki Education. Please do the following before moving your work out of the sandbox:
 * Remove all instances of "Dr." Wikipedia articles don't include titles like "professor" or "Dr."
 * Instead of "Life and Education" it should be "Life and education", same goes for all other section titles
 * You're missing a references section
 * references don't belong in section titles
 * You're selected literature section is far too long. You should trim this down to only the 3-5 most cited publications this person has had. This is a biography, not a resume, LinkedIn, or CV

Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:35, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

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Hi, thank you for the information. My team and I have already moved the article to the mainspace with these changes and more. I am currently working on more edits, specifically the addition of an info box to add to the page. As I review the article I will be sure to look out for the things you suggested. We are currently in the process of peer review for our class's pages. Others on Wikipedia outisde of our course have graciously reviewed and made edits to the article so that it is more up to standard. Thank you, BISCquick (talk) 21:42, 15 April 2020 (UTC)