User talk:BNg22

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Peer Review
Hi Brendan!

I was looking at your article on the firefly squid. In the anatomy section, should the "squid" in the first sentence be singular? I think the rest of the section is great, I like the links to different orders and families, and that expiration was clear. Would you consider adding a photo here? I think it could fit the section and really bolster your writing.

I think the breakdown into two sections for the Biolumen. section was smart, my only question is could the background section have a different name? Maybe like "general overview?" Just an idea.

The citations look great and length seems appropriate. Gummycrown (talk) 21:13, 29 March 2022 (UTC)