User talk:BSAC 1 Set 3 Group 2

Your recent edit to the Constitution of the Philippines article
This comment discusses your most recent edit to this article. I have reverted it, and will comment below on that reverted edit.

The edit replaced some portions of the article with alternative content. I will comment on your alternative content, highlighting particular parts of that alternative content..

The first bit of alternative content read:

"Commonwealth of the Philippine Constitution was created that governed the country from 1935-1946 to prepare the country on achieving its independence. This constitution was dominantly influenced by Americans, which have the traces of the Malolos Constitution, the German, Spanish, and Mexican Constitution, constitutions of several South American countries and the unwritten English Constitution."

I can sort-of follow this, but the English is too fractured for me to be sure that I read it correctly. The phrase "was created that governed the country" in the first sentence is particularly difficult to follow, and the second sentence would need some clarification and rearrangement. Both sentences need support.

An insertion added at the end of the following paragraph read:

"The right of suffrage by male citizens of the Philippines who are twenty-one years of age or over and are able to read and write, this was later on extended to the right of suffrage to women within two years after the adoption of the constitution."

This is understandable, but it is not a sentence. Regarding the extension of suffrage to women, Article V, Section 1 does provide that this should be done if some conditions are met, but no more than that. Information about whether or not this was done is beyond the scope of information on the constitution itself but might be of interest in this article. If included in this article, supporting sources should be cited.

A clause was added in a sentence in the paragraph which follows this, reading:

"[...], and it was ratified by Pres. Roosevelt in Washington D.C on March 25, 1935. Elections were held in September 1935 and Manuel L. Quezon was elected as the president of the Commonwealth."

President Roosevelt did not ratify the 1935 constitution, he certified it in accordance with Section 8 of the Tydings–McDuffie Act (see here). My comment concerning scope re the previous addition also pertains here.

Following the changes discussed above, a short paragraph was replaced with two longer ones. I won't comment here on that except to say that my comments on that would be generally similar to my comments above.

Thanks for your interest in improving this article, but please do take more care in the future. Perhaps some of the advice at WP:BETTER might help. Cheers, Wtmitchell (talk) (earlier Boracay Bill) 13:19, 28 November 2019 (UTC)

(addition) Re women's suffrage, I see in the 1937 Philippine women's suffrage plebiscite article that the plebescite resulted in approval. Wtmitchell (talk) (earlier Boracay Bill) 14:25, 28 November 2019 (UTC)