User talk:BWeaver2007/Ithaca, New York/WriteAboutNowThen Peer Review

Dear Bobbie, the paragraph about typhoid is very well done. It's neutral and informative, incorporating appropriate quotes. Your commitment to seeking out the Ithaca history book, purchasing it and using the information bolster the available history of the city is admirable. You also correctly identified the need for a third party to cite their death and sick statistics.

Your handling of the KKK and civil rights movements in Ithaca are very neutral, contextualizing an evolving awareness among the Ithacan population. The citations are wonderful.

Given more time, I would encourage a new section just on the waterfalls, their uniqueness and the tourism the bring in. The section on recent history could also be expanded. Transportation, an existing section, is likely given more time than necessary in the article and could use a trim.

Overall, great job. WriteAboutNowThen (talk) 20:58, 3 April 2021 (UTC)