User talk:B Betts0312/Evaluate an Article

Good job, B Betts0312, but nowhere on your review do you actually say which page you are reviewing! This may have been one of the sections that was deleted with the 'corrupt' link when we tried to post it, and I figured this was the patrician page since you've assigned yourself that topic for the semester. It sounds like you've outlined some good areas for improvement, like listing individual people and their roles/contributions in Rome, adding more recent citations, and cleaning up the language. Remember to start small in terms of areas for improvement (i.e. one thing at a time) rather than trying to tackle everything at once. I'm looking forward to seeing the progress you make on this page over the course of the semester! Grade: 9/10. Gardneca (talk) 15:21, 6 February 2020 (UTC)