User talk:Babcia333

September 2011
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Asia Carerra, as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be reverted, because Wikipedia cannot accept unsourced material or original research. This includes material lacking cited sources, or obtained through personal knowledge or unpublished synthesis of previously published material. Wikipedia requires that all material added to articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable sources explicitly cited in the text in the form of an inline citation, which you can learn to make here.

In addition, here are few other tips that may help your edits:


 * Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and therefore, articles need to be written a formal, neutral manner. As such:
 * They should not refer to subjects by their given name, but by their surname. ("Asia became engaged")
 * Articles should not exhibit language that is overly promotional, emotive or informal, such as "On a wonderfully happy note".
 * Ampersands should not be used in lieu of the word "and", except in cases of proper nouns or direct quotes. ("and Catty & Devin")
 * Sentences should end in only one punctuation mark, not two ("call him Daddy..")
 * The first word of a paragraph in an article should not be indented. Doing this causes the text to be encased in a gray box of a different typeface and size from the rest of the article, which you can see here.
 * As an extension of the above, you should always Preview your edits before you save them to check for things like this, or at least check your edits after saving them. If you're having trouble, please don't leave an article in that state; just ask for help from someone like me. If you wish to practice your editing skills, rather than using an actual article, you can use the Sandbox.

If you have any other questions about editing, or need help regarding the site's policies, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. :-) Nightscream (talk) 22:48, 10 September 2011 (UTC)