User talk:Babyphilosopher/sandbox

Assessment of Article Draft
Revisions necessary

It's great that you've found some material that's not covered in Fleming's existing page. However, you need to expand on your prose to reach the 500 words. You should add some information about Fleming beyond a description/analysis of this one film.

Also, you need to fix some of the citations. For instance, the Davis citation needs journal information (volume/edition), which you've included correctly in your annotated bibliography, and the publication info in the Tanner reference needs to be clarified. For websites (like the NFB) you need to indicate when you last accessed the page, just in case the URL changes. Please double-check that all citations properly are formatted using Chicago style.

This is a great start. But you still have some work to do before it is ready for mainspace.

--110laurent (talk) 02:38, 22 February 2016 (UTC)