User talk:BacchusMC

Good start on Draft:Bacchus MC, but needs improvement to publish
Good start, but it's not ready yet due to lack of sourcing. Please see my extensive comments at top of draft; follow those, hit Resubmit, and after a couple more reviews we should be able to publish no problem: Draft:Bacchus MC. MatthewVanitas (talk) 05:53, 13 October 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bacchus MC (October 13)
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MatthewVanitas (talk) 05:47, 13 October 2014 (UTC)

Great work, Bacchus MC published!
Nice work! A few small notes: some of your footnotes are missing key details, see tags affixed to them noting issues. Also, footnotes are about the subject, not ancillary topics; that is, we're not asking you to prove things about Bacchus, we're asking for a footnote from an expert observing why the club named itself Bacchus. Not a life-or-death matter if you can't find it, but tagged "citation needed" just on principle. In such a case, it'd be fine to cite the club itself explaining the name for itself.

Overall, great work! I hope you'll stick around and write more articles about the motorbike scene in Canada. Maybe write about some famous figures in the history of Canadian biking? Any Canadian motorbiking companies/workshops in history which don't yet have their own articles? Any famous events/incidents in Canadian biking which merit their own articles? Feel free to ping me on my Talk page if you want to bounce ideas (or if you reply here). Thanks for your good efforts and patience in learning to draft and making needed corrections. MatthewVanitas (talk) 07:53, 14 October 2014 (UTC)

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