User talk:Bader15 h/sandbox

Hello everyone,

This is my Sandbox Page. My Aritcle will be in Collaborative decision-making software especially in the last part which is about Technology factors that underpin enterprise CDM[edit. I stared looking for good sources to improve this part.

Thanks

Here is what i'm going to reviewed and focus on it.

Technology factors that underpin enterprise CDM[edit | edit source] A BI CDM module is underpinned by three factors.

Ease of use: CDM software follows the Web 2.0 self-service mindset. The collaborative components within the BI solution cater for a diversity of user ability and skill levels to ensure knowledge does not remain departmentalized. Integration: A CDM platform allows users to discuss their analysis alongside their BI content. Because the CDM platform is within the BI tool, users can initiate analysis and conversation in full view of the data. The need to set up meetings and discussions in isolation from data set is reduced. The collaborative process remains documented in a single open-access space, and discussion remains on topic. Social BI facilitates effective CDM because both the collaborative platform and data are located in the one place. Web-based: Being Web-based, the collaborative platform allows all relevant stakeholders to follow and contribute to discussion as it unfolds, regardless of location, time difference or device used to access it

I'm working to improve the module factors and add more sources.

Technology factors that underpin enterprise CDM[edit | edit source] A BI CDM module is underpinned by three factors.

Ease of use: CDM software follows the Web 2.0 self-service mindset. The collaborative components within the BI solution cater for a diversity of user ability and skill levels to ensure knowledge does not remain departmentalized. Integration: A CDM platform allows users to discuss their analysis alongside their BI content. Because the CDM platform is within the BI tool, users can initiate analysis and conversation in full view of the data. The need to set up meetings and discussions in isolation from data set is reduced. The collaborative process remains documented in a single open-access space, and discussion remains on topic. Social BI facilitates effective CDM because both the collaborative platform and data are located in the one place. Web-based: Being Web-based, the collaborative platform allows all relevant stakeholders to follow and contribute to discussion as it unfolds, regardless of location, time difference or device used to access it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bader15 h (talk • contribs) 00:36, 18 October 2016 (UTC)

Review
Hi Bader, I’m copy editing your article, so here are few things I would like to suggest: 1.	You can create links in your article. Use some other Wikipedia articles to link your article with them. For example, you can link the word BI (Business intelligence) to the article BI in other wiki page. 2.	You can add your references. http://www.isogmbh.com/services/airport-management/collaborative-decision-making-cdm.html is reference you can use. 3.	You can expand your points some more by adding content from this source. Good luck and Happy editing! Asmat (talk) 02:47, 2 December 2016 (UTC)