User talk:Baelynnmcg/sandbox/articledraft

Comments from Peer Review
Overall good work. It stays very neutral and unbiased throughout and you added a lot of information that will make the original article so much better and more informational. Your new edits to the entry are very good. It gives me an idea of what the article is about without going too much into depth.I saw a couple grammatical errors such as saying a serious of events when I think you meant series of events. Also, in your new format edits you have a comma between age and gender even though you only have two items listed. I also think that you could maybe add a rules section and or have the different types of games listed in separate sections. Under your reference sections add more to the citing. If you go to the citing tool you can add the link and it does the citing for you and finds all the information you need to have a proper citing. Lindsaylongg (talk) 15:50, 21 March 2019 (UTC)