User talk:Bagchia/sandbox

This is a good start to the translation of the French version of the French Cyber Command. Everything seems to flow well and naturally in English. The only error I found in line-by-line reading was in this sentence: "Since January 1, 2017, the cyber defense operations of the French armed forces under a single joint organization under the authority of the Chief of the Defence Staff (France)." Other than that, I think the article is organized in a logical and easy-to-follow manner. Bentzleyc (talk) 18:25, 13 May 2019 (UTC)

I think this page flows naturally and the page topic is very interesting. Most of all, the page structure seems well organized and easy to read. Wnsgur3470 (talk) 18:37, 13 May 2019 (UTC)

Your translation seemed to flow smoothly. So far, you have a good start to you Wikipedia article. I guess the one spelling mistake you have in this is when you typed "Organisation" instead of "Organization" Pallekoa (talk) 23:04, 19 May 2019 (UTC)

I'm a little bit confused. Are you writing about Cyber Force in France? or in the US? It reads very well, I'm just confused. Bridges2Information (talk) 06:17, 20 May 2019 (UTC)