User talk:Bahnzaijr/Bahnzaijr's Draft

Peer Review of Draft Wikipedia Article/First Review
APA citation of sources is accurate. It looks like it was done with the wikipedia template, so why wouldn't it? I inserted section headers with applicable headings The headers provided the necessary breaks in the paragraphs No internal links Inline citation format was correct

Most of the article was neutral, however, there were a couple sentences that could be considered opinion, I used parentheses to highlight these sentences, I also believe that some sentences could use more citation.

I believe this source "Harpoon and Quarters." comes from an encylopedia of unknown quality. I would try using more sources from newspaper articles, law reviews, and the federal government. The other sources seem to fit the "reliable sources" profile.