User talk:Bailey Knotts/sandbox

Prof D feedback on draft
This is a great start, Bailey. You have some good ideas and I can't wait to see the final draft. Consider clarifying the significance of the property. Why is it important enough to be included on the National Register? Who was Samuel Moorman? Is there any other historical event or development that is relevant to the property? Make full use of the bibliography on the NR form as well.

You'll want to fix the reference to it's location. It is in Campbell County and not associated with Lynchburg.

You have made good use of embedded links. As a rule, you wouldn't use these for ordinary terms (e.g. smokehouse, cemetery).

Since you're adding an architectural description, you'll want to revise the lead so that the architectural details included there are in the new section. Make sure the lead follows Wikipedia guidelines.

Continue to work on writing with active voice and eliminating proofreading errors.

Including the cemetery is a nice touch. Who is buried there? Anyone of significance? What are the dates of some of the graves (e.g. oldest, most recent)? If you don't have any additional information, it's not likely to warrant a whole section.

Keep up the good work! dddonald (talk) 15:59, 24 February 2020 (UTC)