User talk:Baileyherman/Lilit Martirosyan (activist)

Peer Review
Your Sandbox Draft would really add to the article overall, which is mostly background information about this activist at this time. Currently, the article only has a biography section, which is dominated by the section about the Right Side NGO -- which doesn’t talk much about her individually, but rather about the organization overall. This article provides a lot of clear information about the Right Side NGO, and its actions since its founding. This article could be improved through the addition of images (since there are none right now) and by providing more background information on Lilit Martirosyan as an individual rather than having the article be dominated with information on the Right Side NGO. The Early Life section could also be expanded upon. What made her want to co-found Right Side NGO? How did she go about founding the organization? There is no information on the page about her age, upbringing, or where she is from in Armenia. This article is undeveloped currently but I think that your additions would add to its completeness overall. It has a lot of information on the Right Side NGO, but not much information on any other aspects of Lilit Martirosyan, or any specific contributions she has made to the organization.

Teddy0129 (talk) 14:58, 3 April 2023 (UTC)